29 October, 2012

55 fiction.

I glanced sideways and realized that he was still staring at me. It made me uncomfortable, but he didn't seem to notice. I wanted to stand up for myself, but didn't want to attract attention in the process. But the final blow came when he said to me one day, "You are beautiful, but stop dressing up like this."

The man who had ogled at my breasts everyday through the six yard wonder felt he could control the way I chose to dress.

10 comments:

  1. :)

    Speechless...I sometimes wonder how men can do this. Make us cringe one moment and then say something which would make us seem like fools with dirty minds!!

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    1. Thank you Me! :)
      Knowing that the queen of 55 fiction enjoyed my first few steps into 55 fiction is a huge compliment!! :) You made my day!!

      True, such kind of men are different species all together. Dogs turned on by the sight of bitches. :|

      Hugs <3 :*

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    2. OMG!!

      "Queen of 55 fiction"!!!

      Now that was some compliment :D

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    3. And a deserved compliment! :)

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  2. You created a whole story in this limited number of words! And it's very well written. :)

    But I do hope we're spared the torture of all this ogling. Stupid people everywhere! :/

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  3. eee such guys irritate me a lot. nice post..
    love reading 55 fiction..
    do chk this out, would love to hear your opinion.
    :)
    http://musingofmumbaimalayalee.blogspot.in/2012/10/55-fiction.html

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    1. Thanks a ton Aswathy :) Will check out :))

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  4. so true it is....mindless beasts! :/

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