30 October, 2012

55 fiction.

I watch as their bodies sway to the sound of music. I wonder how they are so much in sync. I look on from my spot at the bar, holding my drink, wishing Akhil and I could get back together. His hands clench her waist and their eyes meet. I am invading their privacy, screams my inner voice. I watch them lock lips. I let go of the breath I have been holding in. My eyes are moist.

I leave my unfinished drink and walk out, thinking of that line he always told me.. You will be the only love in my life. 


9 comments:

  1. OMG!!!

    This was stupendous. Loved it like crazy.

    I had written a thought couple of weeks ago when I was going through a rough patch which kind of resonates with this:


    What hurts the most at times is when trouble seems like the end of the world for you and for the other person is it nothing.....and expects you to also believe the same.


    :)

    I kind of detest such people as I wonder how come they don't have feelings and can treat someone like this!I fail to understand their psyche.

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    1. Thank you!! :) Loved reading your comment!
      So true, such people expect others to understand when they are going through a rough patch, but fail to reciprocate. It's really sad when you invest your time and energy on some and they fail to do that for you when you need it. No expectations, an easy life. But impossible. :(

      <3

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  2. it really wrench heart to see such a situation. liked the last line, made me think how easily promises are broken.
    well written
    :)

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  3. I love this "55 fiction" thing! Especially because it is so effusion arising and deep in emotions. I loved the way you penned it. I strongly urge you to write more such amazing words! :)

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    1. Thank you for the wonderful words Rachit! :)

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  4. Loved the end note!
    It such happens that when you fall in love, out of sheer excitement or may be as a result of being a filmoholic, u end up making promises...but forget to keep it!

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    1. I'm a HUGE filmoholic :D
      Thanks for the comment luv!

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  5. oops! then...but that's what I feel....experience ;)

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