04 May, 2013

This is what it feels like..

I leaned on your shoulder,
And felt your hand against my cheek,
The heat in your palm,
Comforted me in the shivering cold,
Aaaah..
This is what home feels like.

You pulled me close to you,
And balanced me with your hands,
Then you twisted me around,
And gave me a warm hug,
This is what belonging feels like.

You took it up as your responsibility,
To make sure I was motivated enough,
To do the right things,
You heard my calls for help,
And attended to it immediately,
This is what being watched out for feels like.

You made sure I was happy,
To the stars you went,
To ensure a smile on my face,
When I got angry,
You patiently listened to the reasons for my anger,
Never did you raise your voice,
Or make me feel small;
You're my true inspiration,
You're a beautiful person, in and out,
And yes.. I can whole heartedly say,
This is what love feels like.



25 comments:

  1. BEAUTIFUL EMOTIONS SPILLED OVER........YES, THIS IS TRUE LOVE ,THAT GUIDES, PROTECTS AND CARES:) LOVELY!!!

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    1. Thank you so much for your prompt comments! I love them and have started to look forward to them. They bring a smile onto my face!! :)

      Yes indeed.. Thank you!

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  2. ;)!!!!keep posting your wonderful creations, coz I keep looking forward for them!!!!

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  3. WOW! True love is such a deep feeling... it can win over world! people say world is not this anymore it is fake... well i guess if love is your world it cannot be fake! The day you FEEL like this you've won over the bad bad world! :D

    Very very deeply written... :)

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    1. You write the most beautiful comments!! :)

      Thank you very much hun! <3

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    2. Aww... Thank u:)))))

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  4. Aww, this is so sweet. Even though I have a very hate-hate relationship with the feeling of 'love'! This is a very nice post! Hope to read more in the future! :)

    Love,
    Krittika
    xx
    http://krittika-barua.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you! I love love and love expressing love!! <3 It's a beautiful feeling hun :)

      Hope to see you here often!

      Hugs!

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  5. You must be really lucky to have someone like him to love you so truly..believe me! they are like one in million and please never leave him or hurt him in any way as once they are broken they will be loveless forever... :)

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    1. Thank you for the beeeeeeeeautiful comment Namrata <3 :) hugs!

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  6. At the risk of getting banned and/or reported for abuse, I write this.
    I thought that the first para was actually describing a slap, up till the 'Aaaaahh'.
    Seriously :P

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    1. You are too much!! :D
      I will never ever write you nice comments.. EVER! :P

      Wait.. Is that what has happened with you? Girl leans on your shoulder and you slap her!? :O Or maybe you leaned on a girl's shoulder and she slapped you!? *the latter sounds perfect* :P

      Haha!

      Hugs <3

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    2. If I continue to write inflammatory (no pun intended :P)comments like these, then I don't even have to wait to lean on a woman's shoulder to get slapped :P

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    3. Hahaha I wouldn't slap you *I think* :D good you said no pun intended :P

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    4. Slap you for the comments I mean ;) :D

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  7. Still, Delhi males are currently the favourite punching bags of women the world over :P
    Not without good reason though.

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    1. Not without good reason. - Why do I love this line!?

      Cause you're a Delhi guy and I have a fairly good reason to slap you :P You're tempting me too much lol! :D

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  8. Nai yaar, maaf karo :P
    Thanks to a few rotten samples, we suffer enough female bashing :o

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    1. Hahaha true that one. :D

      You're forgiven ;D

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  9. Aaahh, this is sooooo beautiful :)

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  10. Loved this one soooooooooooooooo much cannot tell you!!

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